Intriguing or stupid? Worth continuing?

wow. good job. this is actuall helluva ride from that forum. But i actually can see some similarity between your and Poe's work. the repition is a noticible factor. Oh and i read what you had in plan for the plot. The beggining emotion and girl part was good. the ending with the killing and the crazyness sounds kind of too much. I mean where is that going to get?